all the world is mad

Separating my critique because I want to know what's up.

Hope you're alright. :c
[link]
Dunnoe why you're sharing a kotatsu, ahha, Kenshin's a ladies' man.

------
From 2 months ago? Wow, this is pretty good. Glad you colored it, because it the colors are fabulous.

So I'm pretty sure you already know the faces you draw are already pretty and cute, hehe, so I'll help you see the body.

I'm not sure what age range you draw your girls, but I imagine 12 to 14-year-old girls with flat chests. That isn't a problem of course, I think those kind of girls are extra cute and innocent. So, I think her body looks good, except for the fact that her torso is a bit long and her upper back needs some shaping, because of our ribcage and shoulders.

I think you worked alright with her arm there, it's just the problem of it being too... straight. There's the shape of our muscles in our body that you need to think about and apply.

I do like what you did with the table and chairs. They look perfect and I'm pretty jealous of that. I cannot STILL LIFE LOL whatsoever.